OK, I decided im going to post one of my stories on Queeky,Please comment.
here is the first part:
The small kit raced through the forest with the fox not far behind, she squealed for her mother but couldn't see her. She tried to run faster, but the fox was catching up fast. The kit felt as if her lungs would burst, she didn't think she could keep this up much longer. She let out a yowl of relief when she saw the patchy pelt of her older brother, Splash.
“Hold on Monarch” he yelled. “I'll get you, just run a bit farther.”
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